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Review:ashleydelacour says:
Hello! Here's your requested review:

Just off the bat, Manor is misspelled in the third or fourth paragraph.

Didn't notice any technical errors in your story, so I have nothing to say there.

I liked that your character remained faceless. It really enforced the idea that they didn't care who joined their forces, as long as they had body count. It reaps more sympathy, in a way, that we know nothing of this young boy, yet he's being forced into this. Even worse: that he knows his parents would be celebrating his induction, from afar, not even attending with him!

It was a quick read, so there's not much analysis I can give, but it was well written, however short.

-ashleydelacour

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