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Review:spreaddapoo93 says:
And new characters are born! I'm loving Pickett; he's such a typical cospiracist... with statistics and sexual psychology involved. :D

But he seems to be hitting the nail fairly square on the head - the tension is insurmountable, with Dom entering the scene. Part-veelas never seemed scarier, am I right? (And before I start sounding like an avid manicurist addicted to the gossip column, I will back down and actually review with a straight head).

Ooh~ I heart the line "never get caught between a part-Veela and a redhead. Blood will be shed." It makes me want to smear blue on my body, don a kilt and go Braveheart on this fanfic! :)

The DUEL! Ah! I have never read a duel scene as effective before - ah, with everything on high-key intensity mode (bam bam pow!), you really kept the suspense alive. Once again, your stunningly visuality (your ability to invoke such stark images in the reader's mind) is gr(with double ferocity)eat!

Anyway, I'm really intrigued by Potter - what is he up to? Hmm...

Author's Response: Pickett is a wee bit of Jeremy and Jason smooshed together from Game. So basically he's my favorite character ever :D

ACTUALLY doing a Braveheart on this fic would be very fitting. I've already done Braveheart in Capers, as you saw, but that was just the battle charge. etc. is like the whole war. Spoken by someone who's never seen Braveheart, of course.

The duel was waaay fun to write :D It's like a dance, no?


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