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Review:Secret Santa says:
Addie interrupted that moment between Dezzy and Salazar :( Argh...that means Salazar is still as shady and as mysterious as ever and I'll have to wait...

That scene with Godric was very sweet. It was a bit sudden and it did take me by surprise, but it was sweet nevertheless...and warm. He's such a contrast to Salazar. And I really like these little contrasts and all. I have the strange feeling that Godric and Salazar are much younger than Helga and Rowena in this story. I mean, I can't remember if you've actually told us how old Rowena and Helga are...but they feel much older what with Rowena being a mother to twelve girls and Helga being their governess or something.

But this was another lovely chapter! The pile of eavesdropping princesses was a nice touch of humour. I also really enjoy how the sisters look out for each other; it's such a nice part of the story, seeing as they are in essence without real parental care - their mother dead and their father being too busy and all.

Anyway, this has been another great read. I'll definitely be coming back for further chapters :D Keep writing!

Author's Response: Dezzy and Salazar's almost-moment... and in comes Addie! Haha. That was fun to write. They were SO CLOSE. But not if the older sisters have anything to do with it!
Godric is really kind and sweet, and I really love writing him. He seems to always know what to say, and is a really warm person.
The ages of the founders are a little warped in this story, but I focused more on who the characters were rather than how their ages are changed. The fun thing about AU is that you can mess with things like age which opens up a lot of possibilities!
I love the princesses, they alwasy make me happy when I'm writing them, so I'm thrilled that you're enjoying them! Thanks again for these amazing reviews!
Cassie :)

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