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Review:Secret Santa says:
Aaah, Godric is a stable hand? This is getting too good :D Is there going to be a triangle between Dezzy, Salazar and Godric? There is, isn't there? I'm already beginning to like your Godric a lot bahaha :D

And Dezzy, what are you doing going alone to the enchanted forest and pavilion?! And oh, Beatrice, Beatrice with her impulsiveness and tempestuousness and her unguarded tongue! Nice characterisation there.

Things are really picking up in this chapter; they're getting exciting! And of course, I especially loved that you introduced a new character here. And I especially enjoy the fact that he views Dezzy as an equal, rather than be humbled by her status and all. This makes it so much better! OK, I've really enjoyed this. I hope to be reading more soon :D

Author's Response: Yes, Godric is a stable hand! I wanted him to be a character that wouldn't immediately scream Godric Gryffindor. I think people would picture him as a king or a prince, so I'm hoping to surprise readers!
Bea really cares for her sister, and that's why she gets so angry at Dezzy for going into the forest alone. She can be responsible, even though it doesn't seem like it, and I think she feels that responsibility when Dezzy leaves to go to the forest.
I love writing Dezzy and Godric together, and I'm so glad you liked them too! Thank you again for another wonderful review!
Cassie :)


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