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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello! I'm back for morereading and reviewing!

This is such a delightful chapter! It really made me smile - all the interactions between the sisters, and Dezzy's honesty and straightforwardness in the letter to her father, and finally the really gorgeous fan dance scene. That scene was just beautifully evoked, and was full of lovely details.

She took a few quick steps to the left, staying on her toes, and then spun, extending her left arm above her, holding the fan, and her right arm out to the side. She stopped in the small pliť before repeating the steps, only faster this time.

Aaah..there was such a sense of movement and breathlessness in these sentences! It was really nicely done. And I'm too intrigued to find out moreabout Salazar!

On to the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to the rest of your lovely reviews! I've just been really busy! Haha.
I'm so glad you like the sisters and how they interact with each other! That's a really important part of the story for me, and I wanted all the girls to be able to tease each other and have fun, but also really care about each other.
Dezzy's letter to her father was really interesting for me to write. I wanted to make sure nothing was too personal, which was hard because she is writing to her father after all!
The dance was easier to choreograph than write, that's for sure! I'm glad everyting made sense and you felt the movement of the piece!
Thank you so much for the fanstastic review!
Cassie :)

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