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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Holiday Review Swap!

I'm continuing this because I want to xD

Ooh, a change of perspective. I think Fred is very angry about dying. I mean, anyone would be in those circumstances. I think he's the most angry about leaving George behind though, sad that they won't have any more experiences together.

I liked the memory you showed us, they're like two halves of the same person. I like how you always put "we," like "we will die together," like there was no question about it. Now they're seperate for the first time.

I want to know more about where Fred is, is he anywhere? Can he look down now upon his family? I expect these questions will be answered ;)

And I'm looking forward to getting back into George's perspective aswell :) Great job, again!

Author's Response: Hello there! Gah, sorry for taking an age to respond to this :( I'm glad you liked this story enough to continue with a second swap :D

I'm a little unhappy with this chapter; I think it needs some serious rewriting/editing.

Yeah, Fred isn't the happiest with dying :P As for the question "is Fred anywhere?", well he is...and right now he is separated from George and neither can see each other :) Don't want to make things too easy for either of them!

Thanks for the lovely review!


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