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Review:Secret Santa says:
Ho ho ho! You've been very good this year.

That poor Prefect really had his hands full with those two mischievous boys on their first night. I loved how Sirius fell into stride with James, yet he still had his thoughts distracted by how his family will react to his House assignment. Poor Remus is already tragic, feeling bad for laughing at someone else. He's just a big softie, that one. You really have me feeling a lot of sympathy for Peter too. He has a lot to overcome and you have given him a sensitivity that anyone can relate to.

But James... well. Doesn't he ever try to behave himself?

"Oh, right, we're trying to not dock any points. I forgot."

I think that was my favorite line of this whole chapter. You are doing a great job of rationalizing his behavior and letting us into his head. Of course all his actions are justified (in his own head, anyway).

You have such an engaging way of writing each of these characters. I really enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response: Ho Ho Ho! Hi :D

I love Secret Santa! I think the boys needed a headstronf Prefect in their First Year, so they could learn the rules... and then rebel against them. ;) Peter used to be one of my most hated characters, but gradually he's becoming one of my favourite to write. (Ron will always keep no. 1) I'm so glad that you've picked up on the character differences. :)

James? Never.

Thank you for leaving such a lovely review, i'm currently editing Chapter 4 so that one will be better as soon as the queue reopens! :P

Keira :)

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