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Review:ShelbyBlack says:
I'm back again! I promised a longer review and I shall deliver :D

First of all, I'm so sorry I didn't reply after every chapter, hopefully this review might make up for it a bit! But I do want you to know that I loved every chapter and every word of them!

Okay lets get this started...

Regulus is like...I can't even...I mean, this boy gets me in fan girl mess, it's quite sad really. In my defense both Sirius and Regulus do, and as we all know Sirius/OC's aren't hard to come by. I complain about the lack of Regulus/OC and completely went past this one in my regular searches D: What is this madness?! Please for the love of Merlin do not abandon this, you're amazing and this story is amazing.

Oh no he DIDN'T, siriusly Regulus?! Siriusly?? You had to look at her? *facepalm* Silly boy. Regulus is beyond perfect as well as Addie, their lovey relationship doesn't even make me cringe :D Which shows so much about your writing, it terms of how believable and real it is.

I'm literally on edge throughout every chapter praying to Merlin that Regulus or Addie don't get caught by someone (Amos/Slytherins/Lucy so on) Eeppp! So scary! I know what would happen! And I really don't want to know D: But I do also...but ahhh!

Now with this whole Sirius business...
I really don't want Addie to be with him, let Regulus have the girl for once Sirius :'( Tehe!

But siriusly, I love you for making a Regulus/OC that I can actually enjoy and not cringe at!
Your writing is wonderful, simple and well thought out :D I love that I can feel a lot of your passion for this story throughout your writing, which makes me want to stick around until the very end :D

Now I will be waiting (not so patiently) for the next wonderful chapter! If you need anything whatsoever don't hesitate to message me here or on the forums :)

Much love,
ShelbyBlack
xx

Author's Response: WOW! Holy mother of merlin, the length of this review! I'm flattered!!

I'm so glad I'm not the only one though! I first decided I wanted to write a Regulus/OC when I actually found a decent one, but I can't remember what it's called now, so I can't recommend it, sorry!

But yeah, then I started imagining senarios, and somehow came up with this fic! But I digress... the basic thing is that I'm the same as you - Regulus works that mysterious, dark and interesting (as well as brave) thing that definitely makes my heart flutter!

But yeah, I loved writing that moment! I knew everyone would be like *omg he so didn't* and the thought really made me laugh! Plus, I just love a little bit of drama, and as the fic gets heavier from this chapter it was a good way to kick it off :)

Well, you'll have to read on to see, I think you'll like the next chapters -they're very interesting!! (although you may cry...)

Feeling so mean now though, doing little hints like that ;)

But truly, thank you for the absolutely lovely comments, you really make me feel a lot more confident in my writing and I promise I'll try to get the update speed sorted out because you've been such a sweetheart :)

Thank you for the offer, if I ever do I'll be sure to call on you! Lots of love to my loveliest reviewer xx


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