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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
It's Voldy Needs a Hug here with your review!

I was blown away by this chapter. I really had no idea what to expect as the summary was vague and the characters, era, and pairings no more informative. You did an excellent job of creating a suspenseful, interesting opening to your fanfiction that is sure to captivate readers.

I loved your descriptions throughout the chapter. They weren't elaborate and over the top or short and rushed. They accurately painted a scene for readers to visualise, while leaving some of the picture up to one's imagination.

This chapter was relatively short and didn't contain a great deal of plot, but I was immediately hooked. The cliff hanger and mysterious society are intriguing, and convincing me to continue reading. Your transitions were also flawless.

Spectacular job!

Author's Response: Hi, Voldy Needs a Hug!!

I'm sorry that I haven't replied to your reviews yet... Life has been busy!

But oh, I could just hug you for all of your praise!! Thank you for enjoying the first chapter, even though it's extremely short and there isn't any backstory or plot. It was my first foray into the fanfiction realm, and so I didn't know what I wanted to do with it until I really got into it.

Thanks so very much!!

~UnluckyStar57


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