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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I would have come and properly attacked this sooner but I recently moved and I had to put it and several other fanfics on hold. It is a painful thing to do! Hahha.
Anyway, we're back with Ms. Pansy again. Oh, I'm really feeling for her right now! She's really being put through it! Firstly, I like that you showed her dealing with a really bad hangover and I enjoyed watching her trudge through the day. It was actually a litle funny and I felt a bit sorry for her, I know what its like to have such a bad headache like that!
But then, Mr. Richards. This was something about Pansy's character that I thought would have changed just a little, even though I had my doubts. He was prattling away for so long and she was clearly not in a good mood that I thought she would actually snap. Her head was pounding, there were too many lights and his gossip was making her irritable. But what she actually did was nearly as bad! Argh, I know she didn't really mean it and I KNOW she wouldn't have on any other time but the littel tidbit she gave about Terrence and his wife was still nerve wracking. I knew that it wouldn't have ended well, especially by the rest of the day, where no one spoke to her. I think that they were acting a little childish, they could have confronted her in person if they had so much to say. But then again, I'm over here rooting for Pansy and the next few weeks for her were really hard to read. Poor thing! I hope that situation gets better for her and we find out what the others are thinking, I'm sort of sad to see her being shut out after that last chapter. :(
And the shadows moving when she went home. I really love how you show her mental state in the most well-crafted ways, its really interesting to see a bit of a decline when her emotions spiral. But her mother! That was so scary for me because I just have the most horrible feeling, I have that image of her laying on her desk in my mind. Compelling and scary and I'm not sure how that's going to be resolved! After the Christmas break is over, I'm going to be really happy to see this story again, I must have answers! :D
Great read, no grammar things and the pacing was superb. :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad to see you back!

I'm glad that you didn't notice any problems with my depiction of her hangover- I really wanted to get across the idea that it's a really bad hangover.

Haha- I KNOW! Poor Pansy- she's wrecked her relationships with her co-workers for the moment. And all for a minute's peace... Well, I'm certain that if she hadn't said what she did, she would have snapped at Mr Richards and that could have had the same (or worse) consequences... Mr Richards does see just about everyone in the Ministry, after all.

You'll find out what happened to her mother in the next chapter, which should hopefully be posted soon after the queue reopens.

Thank you so much for reviewing! I always enjoy reading your reviews! :D


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