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Review:darkkid says:
Hi! I'm raisha from the Slytherin Review Tag thread!

First, I love first person narrative. It always makes me feel so connected to the character!

I really love Charlie's personality! She seems so sassy and audacious! I find her SO interesting and I bet she is so fun to write!

I noticed there was a couple of time you went from present tense to past tense. It's one of those annoying things that don't get picked up in spell check, so it's hard to miss sometimes. >.> Lol, but a simple edit could fix it!

And I love that I've already found myself asking questions. Like "What's going to happen next" sort of questions and "How is this going to play out." It's stuff like that that really sets up a good story and makes it an attention catcher!

Great job! I love this! :D

Author's Response: Hey there!
I'm really glad you like Charlie-and you're completely right, she is very fun to write.
Ah! I always seem to get my tenses muddled in first chapters so I'll definitely be going back to fix that up.
It's great you're asking questions-that was one of the intentions of the first chapter!
Thanks for the lovely review.
Courtney:)

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