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Review:hedwigs_theme says:
Well I'm glad that this story was posted and isn't still sitting on your computer because we at HPFF would have missed out on a really great story!

Before I begin I just want to say that I read your response to my review on chapter 3 and thankyou for replying so soon. I'm really glad that you liked my review! Also, I know you said that you would rather me read this instead of two chapters of your other story but seriously, this chapter was an extra and I would still love to R&R the other story as well!
Now onto your review...

This chapter did not disappoint at all, it was just as good as the previous :) It was such a good ending to an amazing story (and I'm not exaggerating)!

Firstly, I loved (I really need to find a better word to use!) the start of this, how Clara didn't back down and kept fighting and how that guy ran away, priceless *evil chuckle*

And am I stupid or something... I can't believe that I didn't realise that Clara was Oliver Wood's son until his wife, Katie!!, said 'Oliver'. Wow silly me! I also love how you included other characters children from the books that are more minor, Zacharias Smith, Tina Jordan (would I be right in saying that's Lee Jordan's daughter???) and Davies were the ones I noticed. I can't believe I only just noticed this now!

I also adore your characterisation of McGonagall. You wrote her just like JK wrote McGonagall in HP which is incredible! I love her sterness but also her soft spot for Clara. And I love how Dom calls her 'Minnie'!

Lastly, the characterisation of Smith's mum and dad was great. I can't believe that Smith's dad was so cruel to Clara and just didn't seem to care about what his son had done. He makes me so angry. Although I love how you made the mum just so nice and apologetic.

I'm really sad that this is the last chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and reviewing. You are such a talented writer and I hope you continue to write some amazing stories because I shall keep reviewing them (no promises RL might butt it's head into my FF life again)! This was such a perfect ending to Clara's story and I hope she never gets bullied again! Thankyou for providing such an entertaining read, YOU ROCK!!!

1000/10 I loved this so much :D


Author's Response: Aww thank you! :D

An extra review?! I'm actually so happy! :D All of your reviews have made me smile SO much, thank you! :D

I'm actually so glad you love it, it's just great to hear! :D

Don't worry, not many people picked up on that either! Yes, I tried to include minor characters from the books (yes, Tina is Lee's daughter ;)) just because the Golden Trio weren't the only kids there! :p

Really?! My McGonagall seems canon?!?!?! Your comment about me writing her just like JK has made me happy and made me to a strange "SQUEEE!" noise! :p

Oh my golly gosh, thank you for this amazing review! I wanted to post in 'Reviews that made you smile' topic in the forums but I was the last one to post and I don't want to double-post! :p

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!


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