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Review:hedwigs_theme says:
Hey it's me again, sorry about it has taken so long, Real Life is so rude sometimes!

Wow, this gets better and better every time I read a new chapter. It's so fantastic! I know I still owe you 2 reviews on another of your stories, but I think I will review your last chapter of Fun Times as an extra because it is so good :)!

I loved everything about this chapter! The owl names, Musca and Alpha, so adorable and creative, the letter to Clara's dad and the fact that he cares so much about her and the conversation between Clara and Tina is just so natural. I also love how you added the bit about Tina's fear of owls, making her a more realistic character, everyone has fears, right?!

I also really love this quote, "Even though we're Gryffindors, we're not actually lions," she teased. In fact, there were many other witty quotes in this chapter that I just love! For a story on such a serious topic, it has the best humor :)

I also love the little arguements and the friendly teasing between the group, especially Dom's eating thing and Fred sounds like Raj from 'The Big Bang Theory' with his talking to girls problem!

Last but not least, I adore your last line! I was just like "You go girl!!!" and I'm so happy for Clara that she finally stood up for herself :) yay!

Overall, I love your writing style it's just so perfect with absolutely near to zero faults. This was probably one of the best chapters yet and I can't wait to keep reading :D

100/10!

~HT/PWG

Author's Response: Hi again! Don't worry about taking a long time, I understand RL can butt its ugly head in our FF lives. ;)

I'm so glad you liked it, and I'll be really glad if you could review the fourth chapter of this and one review on my other story! I'd love some feedback on the last chapter! :D

Musca and Alpha actually mean something; I just can't remember what! :p I think one meant night and the other flight? Or darkness? I can't remember, sorry! :p

Everyone has a fear and I wanted to portray it in this story, not everyone is strong and perfect. :)

I'm glad you like my humour, so many people tell me in RL that my humour is lame and dry! :p

IT WAS FROM THE BIG BANG THEORY!! :D I think you're the first person that got it! EEE!!! I'm so happy someone finally figured it out! :D

I'm actually so glad you love this story, it makes me so happy to read all your reviews! :D

AND THE RATING IWEGFKDBKH I ALWAYS DO THAT TO PEOPLE I NEVER THOUGHT I'D GET ONE IN RETURN EGUHFVHUKDFVGKDHBGSKDJ LET ME LOVE YOU! ♥

Thank you so much for this review, this has completely made my day! :D :D

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