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Review:Gryffindor Secret Santa says:
This was so adorable on about a million and a half different levels.

I loved the way you started it. Hermione in her own head is a dangerous thing. Usually her ability to analyze, to problem solve, is so amazing but in this instance it's really just not doing her any good. I loved the contrasts you made to her and Ginny. Not only did they feel appropriate, but they made for an awesomely entertaining read.

Ohh the conversation with Rose. I'd want cookies to have to talk about that with my daughter (my imaginary daughter) as well. I think Hermione did really good subtly veering them back to the subject each time and getting a few answers from Rose. That seemed to calm her down enough, for now.

I was really disappointed at first when it was going to be one of Seamus's. I mean, not that it made your writing any less wonderful, but the whole time I had my heart set on Scorpius and THEN you surprised me! And I love how Hermione is so certain he'll be mean then when he's not it's like I can actually feel her relief.

The title was very appropriate. I can't even count how many times in the past I've told my mom something then quickly added, 'but don't tell dad, this is just between us girls.'

Another really lovely one shot!

Author's Response: It's Santa again!

This was a fun one-shot to write and I'm so glad you enjoyed poor Hermione's predicament. Her overanalyzing really isn't doing her much good. In fact, it's probably making things worse for her. And, surprise! Haha. I'm relieved that my bait and switch worked out for the best. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my one-shot!

Happy Christmas, Santa!


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