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Review:IloveNeville says:
I liked your description of how much of a weirdo Vernon is. I specifically liked the part about insisting on taking his shoes off at the door. I know a few people like that. McGonagall sounds like a babe, haha. It was very interesting how you went back to the situation at St Mungo's and gave us another side to the story. I love every scene with James in it, he just seems so adorable. And particularly, in this scene when he's plotting something, he reminded me very much of Harry. That's an interesting change; Lily's considering being friends with Regulus. Your Author's Notes are also very interesting. I strive to make as much of my own story canon as I can, and draw a meaning from any new words I add.

PS. Sorry, this took so long. I've been reading, but I just moved into a new house and we haven't had the internet until now for me to review.

Author's Response: Hey again :)

Writing Vernon was one of my favorite parts of this chapter, so much so that he's making a comeback in a chapter I'll be writing shortly.

Yeah, the whole thing with Karen was sad. I hope you got a good sense of the concern that McGonagall has for her students here. And I'm glad you liked James! He's not my favorite character, but I've had fun playing with him and making him more appealing to Lily.

Thanks for another lovely review!

-Amanda


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