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Review:AlexFan says:
You have nothing to worry about with your characterization of Narcissa.

I was worried that she would be all out of character but I'm happy to say that she was OOC.

The Narcissa in your story matches up very well with the Narcissa in Deathly Hallows, where we get to see the motherly side of her after she lies to Voldemort about Harry.

You can tell, just from this first chapter, that Narcissa is going to love her child more than anything and will do anything in her power to protect her child.

She was a lot softer and kinder than what we see throughout the Harry Potter books but that's not a big thing, pretty easy to overlook.

Good job on the chapter!

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