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Review:Cirque Du Freak says:
OH YOU AWFUL PERSON. I started this chapter and then I realised exactly what you were doing! How could you! This is worse than I imagined! I can't even so much with this that I've not bothered with any italics at all this is what you've stripped away from me! My ITALICS!!!

Oh god no. Fred. :(

This was beautifully done. Of course JKR didn't put in any swearing in the books (even though she really did want to, for Ron in particular) but all of them seemed relevant, because really it would be unrealistic to expect otherwise. When I read the first bits of speech it seemed almost alien until it sunk in properly and everything seemed to flow so much better.

Just...everything with Fred and George was absolutely perfect. The fast run-on speech, the need to make life go that little bit faster, that little bit more humorous. Everything to go as planned, because that's what they were in the end: they were our rock. They were there and stable and rigid in them being 'the twins'. They had it all, they worked their angle as the jokesters and they kept it up because what else did they know? They were young and looking out for the lighter side in life, no matter the danger of it.

And then the story ends when the plan crumbles apart and the bludgers catch up on you, when the light hits you in just the right way. Everything catches up and the dark side of life finally grabs you from everything you know - when it takes the person who was the other part to your rock. No longer a package, no longer an 'and', no longer a pair. Almost as if you're nothing.

jasfagfsauifasdsij this was just as good as the last chapter - I'm just a lot more sober to write a proper review now, ahaha.

fantastico ♥

Author's Response: YES YOU REALLY ARE AN ANGST JUNKIE :D

the first chapter spoiled your mood for the day...and you /still/ came back to read more? I'm so flattered and amused and aaah...thanks so much!

Yeah, I guess it was a bit mean of me to put Fred's death from the perspectives of both twins back to back...I should probably take this chapter out and move it further along the story...where it can ruin the readers' moods over there :DD
But ah, I'm so happy you like my portrayal of the twins! They're not the easiest of characters to tie down in writing. As for the swearing...well, yeah I don't want to go overboard with that (do feel free to point out whenever the swearing gets a bit ridiculous).

And oh, the latter part of your review was so poetic! That was beautiful. And sad.

OK, well, thanks so much once again for coming back to read further! Aahh I'm flattered :D And hope to see you around soon :D

-teh


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