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Review:weasleytwinlover2011 says:
Hannah. Hannah. Hannah. Hannah. Hannah. Hannah!!! Now YOU are going to get hit with a wet fish!!! What the hell was that? Excuse me but are you seriously telling me you're going to put 'You're the only girl for me' in there and have it mean absolutely nothing! You are cold Zyii. How could you do this to me? When do I get my George/Hermione happily ever after? Because I thought it was just about to happen. Aside from that...
this chapter was pure brilliance! I really felt the awkwardness at the beginning and then I felt Hermione's sense of realisation then her sadness then George's disgust and then I felt every other emotion you heaped on top! I do love how close Hermione and George are it makes their feelings for each other much more real! I mean some of the stories these days go from they just know each other to suddenly being madly in love with eachother and I'm just like well how did that happen! Whereas this story is sweet, cute, funny, clever and realistic which is just amazing!
Completely excellent work so far and I cannot wait to read on! Keep it up! Jenna :)

Author's Response: Can't you hit me with a soft chocolatee cookie instead? It was good writing? How do you know it doesn't mean anything? It may have been a clever ploy... You get your happy ever after at the end of another (roughly) nine chapters - be patient (or I'll send you some coal!... jokes).

Oh good, I wanted to get a torrid of emotions in, otherwise it's just a lot of will they won't they, and sometimes that gets boring to write.

I'm writing the next chapter now, it's entitled 'Red Hippos' pahh, I'm special (the good special, not the bad special D; ).

Tyvm for your (as ever) amazing review!

~Zyii

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