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Review:SydneyBlack says:
So, I love Hermione and George together, and you have a nice plot, but you need to watch your spelling/grammar.
And when someone is speaking like this:
"Hi Hermione! How are you?" asked Harry. "Great, thanks!" replied Hermione.

You should have a space between the two people speaking, it's easier to understand who is talking at which time, Like this:
"Hi Hermione! How are you?" asked Harry.
"Great, thanks!" replied Hermione.

So every time someone else starts speaking, you need to jump to the next line, and write their response there.

Remeber you need capitals on words like:
I, I'm and things like that.
Before you publish anything, use spell check aswell.

Again, great plot line, I'm hoping to read more.
:) 7/10

Author's Response: Thannk you for the amazing review!!
Lyss xxoo


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