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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Hello Lovely! :D

*sighs* Where to begin, where to begin? First off, I want to start with the Smiths...like father like son...I can't believe Smith's father is so...arrogant! But I can't hate on the mother. I love Smith's mother. She seems to be the heart and sense of the family, I see.

And I love the Wood family! I think you characterized Oliver as a dad pretty well and Katie...does that mean he married Katie Bell, or is she a different Katie? Just wondering. :)
Oliver is such a great dad! If only my dad was as cool as him...

And Clara! The poor darling, I just want to run up to her and hug her! She did a great job sticking up for herself, and that Smith boy really had that slap going for him! The damn...turkey! (because that's the cleanest insult I can come up with for this review). I hate that boy so much!

Lovely chapter as always, hun! And I bid you a very cheery holidays! :D

Author's Response: DID YOU NOT MAKE THE CONNECTION?!

Maybe I should have made it clearer... :/

IT'S ZACHARIAS SMITH! THAT'S HIS FATHER! :D THAT'S WHY HE'S ARROGANT YAY! :D

I was originally going to make the mother evil but I couldn't have two evil parents... :p

I'm so glad that Oliver was portrayed well! I was like, "NO I DON'T WANT TO WRITE YOU BECAUSE I'LL SCREW YOU UP!" :p

Yes, it means he married Katie Bell, I really adore the two of them together. :'D

Oliver is amazing, I based him off parts of my dad, because when I was getting bullied he kinda acts like that (but with a LOT more swear words - every second word is the f-word! :p) and the rest I just took the good bits of all the other fathers I know. :p

I'm going to answer a bit from your next review, about the end.

I'm glad it seemed a perfect way to end, I was really unsure of it. :p

Thanks for the review! :D

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! :D


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