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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Aaah I was sure I'd favourited this, when not at all, and it turns out I'd missed out on two chapters!

Ehrmahgehrd WHAT. I feel like a squawking parrot now. WHAT WHAT WHAT WAS THAT?

Seeng as this has just happened, I think psychology makes Victoria's return compulsory for the story. This is going to be bad, and I'm going to enjoy every moment of it.

James &hearts I'm so happy he cnfirmed he and Tori wouldn't get back together, and he's not behaving like an idiot but recognises his faults, awww.

Charlie is finally developing into a normal teenage girl, and I like her even more with every chapter.

And Rebecca... I'm actually really surprised, because the contrast between the 'Me' and the 'Tori' chapters is striking. What changed her so much? I hope we found out soon. Right now I'm very angry at her for giving that dress to Charlie. Very, very angry.

Have a nice Christmas! :)

Author's Response: Hi there! And no worries:)
Yep, this chapter was full of WHAAT? moments-some good, some bad.
I'm so glad you like Charlie/James, as I do-I think they are so adorable together! And yes, Charlie is becoming more and more fun to write, as she realises what it means to be a 'normal' teenager.
Thanks for the lovely review!

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