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Review:Faith100z says:
Ohhh my goodness, you've made me an upset mess! :P This chapter was just so sweet and well written, it was amazing!

I've said it before, but I love how you slowly reveal more about character's personalities, and now we can kind of understand Natalie and her quirks/insecurities now.

I'm so glad you justified why she is the way she is. So many stories just say: "This character is guarded, end of story." Whereas you've said "This charcter is guarded, because..." and given reasons behind their personality traits.

Yeah... That was a bit of a rambling mess.oh well :)

And Kate! Oh my gosh, I was not expecting this! :o I kind of assumed she had supported Oliver in the divorce or something and so Natalie didn't talk to her. It's so sad, and now I just want to hug Natalie. :(

Anyway, I should pull my blubbering mess of a self together :P Magnificent writing, this chapter was brilliant!

- Faith

Author's Response: I love this review so much :) I mean, other than the fact that I made you an upset mess!

I know Natalie was very confusing and frustrating as to why she acts the way she does. I'm glad you're finally able to see why she is that way and to understand the different layers of her personality. And I really appreciate that you liked the way it was written, in justifying it.

I have very, very tiny hints in the story about Kate. But yeah I didn't reveal too much on purpose because it's such a painful thing for Natalie to talk about and remember.

Thank you, thank you so much for all of the reviews you've left--I've really enjoyed reading your reactions to the story! And I really hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters :)

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