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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
Wow, your Christmas chapter is just in time for Christmas! By the time I post my Christmas chapter, it will probably be spring. (sigh) Oh well.

The Hogwarts model is cool. I'd get it.

Hey, your Lily got a Pygmy Puff too! I can totally see her begging for one...

I can see why Albus was extra protective of his trunk, although I assumed Albus wouldn't care (much) and Rose would be begging him to look after it. So it's nice that you do things that aren't expected.

Oh, James. Since you claim the biscuits is girl work, you just excluded yourself from doing what the rest of the family is doing.

I wonder if the actual Christmas day chapter will be right before Christmas?

Author's Response: That was really just coincidence - that I was writing it so close to Christmas. I'm working on Christmas day now, but it won't be up for Christmas because the queue is closed. It'll probably go up early in the New Year.

Albus is less concerned about his belongings and more concerned about the villain putting something dangerous or incriminating in there, like chocolates laced with Swelling Solution or something. He tends to get paranoid. And mind you, at Hogwarts, that's kind of understandable. Strange things happen there.

And yeah, James is going through a stage where doing things with his younger siblings is childish and uncool. There'll be more of his "I just want to stay here and do my own thing instead of joining in with the Christmas celebrations" in the next chapter.


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