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Review:unknownhorcrux says:
I really like this story! I like how it flashes through all the years, keeping their relationship as the constant throughout. Nicely written, apart from the one thing that you can't quite decide which tense you're in. I'd suggest making it all present tense - the parts with present tense fit a bit better with the story structure than the bits you wrote in the past tense.
Well done - a really good job!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! :D

ohh, I must have kept changing, sorry about that! I rushed to get this out before the queue closure! I would edit it, but I can't currently. :/

I was aiming it to be in present tense, so I'm glad that you've said that. :)

Thanks for the review! :D

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