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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hi there! it's Courtney from the review tag:)
I really liked this one shot. You have a nice flow of writing-I noticed a few grammatical errors but those are probably just typos.

The best thing, however, about this piece, was the characterizations. Neville was absolutely perfect as was Ginny-I can imagine her being that fierce and determined in the seventh book. I especially liked Luna's line about moon frogs. What can I say, it was very...Luna-ish!

Great first fanfiction! I hope to see more of you in the future.

Author's Response: Hey Courtney. Thank you for taking from your time and leaving me a review. I am always excited to read new reviews!

I'm glad that you liked my flow. I was trying it to be a little more fast-paced since I envisioned the whole story as very action-y. And thanks for pointing out my mistakes. I will go and re-read the whole thing again and polish it a bit :)

I feel like I'm receiving candy every time someone compliments my characterization. I can't stress enough how important characterization is to me. I consider it being one of the basic sustaining pillars of a story and I'm always pleased when someone tells me my pillar is holding!

Thank you again for the lovely review. Hope to see you back soon again :)

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