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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hi there, the review you requested:

First of all I would like to say I love your whole idea for this story, I was really excited to read it when you posted it in my thread as you've used three characters I love from the series that you don't hear that much about and you really didn't disappoint!

I thought you did a really great job of the two characters we already know... Seamus and Dean. I loved the fact you made little references to things we already know from HP like Dean drawing, it was really great to see.

I really connected with your OC in this chapter too which is a great achievement in one chapter! She just came across as so real and and I loved her thought processes to things. I could definitely relate to her slight resentment of Justin and loved the line 'Not bitter at all. Nope.' It just made me smile so much!

I haven't noticed any spelling/grammar and so haven't got any CC to give. The only thing I will admit too is that I missed Oliver Wood... I was expecting him to be here but I understand your setting up your story and as I've mentioned, you have done it really well. I really want to read more!

I have a few other stories to review but I will be coming back at some point to read more... If you want any more reviews please feel free to re-request this! I'd love to read more!

Great job, well done!
Lauren

Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked Seamus and Dean's characterization; I think with what little JKR gave us to work with (in terms of their characters) we really could go anywhere with it. That's what's so much fun about minor characters! :D

I know a lot of people were disappointed about not meeting Oliver right away, but I wanted a really big part of the story (and Edie eventually says this in one chapter) to be about /her/ role in the world, as a young and unemployed woman, rather than her role as a girl in a relationship. But don't worry, Oliver is definitely going to have a huge presence later on ;D

Thanks so much!!!


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