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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Hello! I'm here with your (very late) requested review.

I thought this was well-written. It was a little confusing at points; particularly where there were scene changes. Maybe some sort of dialogue like you used earlier would have helped to clarify where Cedric was, if he was alone or with somebody else, etc.

I particularly enjoyed the part where he was talking about it sucking to be a good guy. But maybe that part needs to be reworked as well because it was one of the more confusing areas :)

I really enjoyed your ending, too, "Hufflepuff and proud." I don't think Puffs get nearly enough attention in fanfic. So bravo for that!

All in all, a nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I loved Cedric in the books so I wanted to give him his story so to speak!

I will have another read through when the queue opens and try and edit the story so it's less confusing... thank you for pointing that out!

Thanks again!
Lauren


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