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Review:Secret Santa says:
Salazar! I would never have guessed :) But this makes things more and more intriguing. It's certainly very mysterious and the way he asked the girls to return to the pavillion was actually a little bit unsettling. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

And I love the way you described the girls getting dressed for their next dance at the pavilion! a swirl of colored crinolines and lace This is such a lovely sentence, and it sounds really poetic and all too!

I think it's great that you're beginning to give the twelve sisters enough details to differentiate them from each other...even the younger ones who're mostly in the background. I love how Addie still wears a black dress despite her mother's death being a few years back! It's quite a nice touch to her characterisation; of course she would remember her mother best because she's the oldest and probably spent the most time with her.

Anyway, this is another lovely chapter! I've enjoyed it :) I will be reading the rest soon!

Author's Response: Hello again! Yes, Salazar was watching them... now we have two founders in the story, and two more to be introduced somewhere down the line! And as for Salazar being unsettling... I can't tell you that that's the end of that!
I'm so glad you still like my descriptions! I think fairytales need a lot of detail, because they have so many little things that are important to the story. And with a story like this, where the girls wear gorgeous ballgowns, you need a good description of what they look like!
The sisters are really fun for me to write, because they're all so different! You'll start to pick up on that later in the story, when you get more information dealing with their personalities and such.
I am so thrilled that you like this story, and hope you continue to enjoy it!
Cassie :)

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