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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Whoa!!

This is a civilian review. Hah, I'll just call it that, since you didn't actually request another one. You got one anyway, so I hope I'm helpful!!

I did not even expect Voldemort to come into play in all of this... I guess since Bellatrix was there, I should have known... But nevertheless, it's pretty cool what you did there: loyalty in exchange for a child. This idea really connects to the seventh book, when Narcissa sheds her loyalty to protect Draco. I don't know if you realized it, but this is a really great connection. Whatever you do with this story next, you can always explore the idea of love of family versus attachment to the cult (of Voldemort, of course!).

And at the end, the last sentence with the few words in italics... Are these significant? They seem to be so, because they are different from the rest. I wonder what they foretell!!

Again, awesome chapter!

~UnluckyStar57

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