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Review:ohmymerlin says:
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stOP BEING SO PERFECT

JAMES IS THE BIGGEST IDIOT I KNOW BUT I STILL LOVE HIM! :D YOU HAVE SUCH A TALENT IN WRITING OH MY GOLLY GOSH! :D

AND I DON'T LIKE HARRY IN THIS STORY, BUT HE SEEMS SO REALISTIC! :O

AND POOR GINNY AND LILY!

AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEW CHARACTER! :D

WHY DOES THERE HAVE TO BE A QUEUE I DON'T WANT TO WAIT! :p

also, I don't know if you know but there will be a period where HPFF goes offline so back-up your stories and reviews just in case! I don't want to lose this fic!!! :D

now back to the fic, OH MY GOLLY GOSH! I REALLY DISLIKE HARRY AT THE MOMENT, BUT I CAN'T WORK OUT IF HE'S DOING IT FOR JAMES OR HIMSELF (because we see James' POV I feel I'm a bit biased).

And Ginny, I feel so bad for her! I love that James still kind of cares for her, he feels guilty about upsetting her but he needs to get over his damn pride!

I actually love this fic so much and this is going to sound weird but I'm actually sort of honoured that I've read it!

It's just SUCH A GOOD NOVEL! And it's so ORIGINAL and there are no cliches!

Anyway, absolutely LOVED this chapter (as if you couldn't tell though! :p) and I can't wait for the next one, whenever that may be! :D

851653127451254108452354178451274845 x infinity/10! ;D

Author's Response: James is a total idiot! I'm glad that you like him anyway though, it means that he's still acting fairly realistically even though he's being a plank :) Harry doesn't come across at all well at this point; hopefully he'll redeem himself in chapters to come. He doesn't mean to be horrible to James; a lot of it is down to how James perceives him to be. As for whether Harry did what he did for himself or for James... It's like he said himself, he hates corruption within the Ministry, he hates people who jump through hoops and take advantage where they can. And he's just done that very same thing...

I am aware about HPFF going offline, no need to worry! I have this fic saved twice on my pc, but I did do a cheeky review backup the other day :) hopefully I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can once the queue is reopened. Thanks for reviewing!



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