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Review:imacullenpottergirl says:

I was just about to say that I missed the Charlie/James time in this chapter when I read your authors note, so now I'm excited for the next chapter. What? They are just so cute together.

To be frankly honest with you, I'm just about as sick of Tori as Charlie is. And I know that that is the whole point of the story and stuff, but I just want Charlie to have a life not clouded by Tori and her "amazingness".

I'm actually quite sad right now. The fight scene between Albus and James has got me a bit emotional. It's just plain sad that they are fighting, and not being... brothers anymore. All over a girl. I'm an only child, so I wouldn't know, but if I did have a sibling, I would love them unconditionally, and not let a boy, or girl for that matter, come between us. Family loves you no matter what right? So why don't they realise that?

And oh yeah. The twins are DEFINITELY annoying me to pieces. You read my mind.

I do think that Tori was sighted in London, and as weird as it sounds, I think that the reason that she left was cause she had a massive breakdown. I dunno, it's just a theory. I have this thought that when or if Charlie and Tori meet they will have a huge heartfelt conversation, and Tori will spill everything to Charlie, and they will be friends. But that's just stupid, and won't happen.

But anyway, another great chapter, and I'm really looking forward to some more Charlie/James time in the next one!
- Abhi

Author's Response: Hey there!
I will admit, I did try to fit some Charlie/James into this chapter, but it just felt awkward and upset the flow, so I took it out.
The fight scene between Albus and James was tough to write and it is very sad that they are not as close as they once was...I can't say for sure whether this gets resolved but...I guess both of us will have to see!
I love reading your predictions, so thank you for that, and I'm glad you liked this chapter!

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