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Review:imacullenpottergirl says:
Another brilliant chapter, I must say.

Well, she did indeed finally meet James, and I have no idea why James told Charlie to stay away from Albus. I mean, they are brothers for heaven sake! What is the worst that he could have done to make James weary of him?

I liked the bit about how James was explaining to Charlie about his expectations and such. That was a great touch, and really gives him a lot of character.

I think that now that she knows that Tori is missing, it's going to make her time at Hogwarts a lot worse. Knowing that she has essentially replaced someone who could be as good as dead. Kinda sucks.

Another great chapter!
- Abhi

Author's Response: Your reviews are making me blush-and honestly making my day! I do love reviews, so thank you!
You will find out about Albus and James' pasts, don't worry! There is a reason for James' caution...though I'll say no more.
Thanks again!

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