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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey this is your review from the review tag in the forum :D

I really enjoyed this fan fiction as I often find when reading Rose/Scorpius flicks that they often fall into stereotypes so it can turn into a rather boring read but, luckily yours didn't!

I really enjoyed the fact that Rose didn't get her man and putting it into dream perspective. It was so realistic that I thought Rose was actually going to marry Scorpius instead if Lily!

I liked how you did the flashbacks and I thought they worked effectively as well as sometimes they can often be irrelavent to the story but, I found they all worked well. I especially liked the one of them being sorted I thought it was really sweet how Rose was like Hermione in not giving into former prejudices and willing to reach out to the outsiders.

I also thought it flowed well and didn't lead to confusion which was really good and overall it was a really enjoyable read :D

Author's Response: Hi!

This is one of those stories that people tend to not be attracted to in general, but I am glad you chose it. Sometimes, I think it is horrible writing, but sometimes I can't help but love it myself xP

I am glad you enjoyed this, and you didn't think it was stereotypical.

You are quite the sadist to be happy that Rose didn't get her man xP haha just kidding. It wouldn't have been realistic at all if she got Scorp. Thus the dream perspective xD

I am always concerned about my flashbacks tying with the story, so I am happy to know that you think they worked well.

Thanks for reading & reviewing!



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