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Review:Your Secret Santa says:
Hello Firefly910!

This is a great one shot which I very much enjoyed reading, although it is not the genre which I normally go for.

I can't believe this is your first fanfiction! You wrote this like you have had many years of experience here at HPFF! OUSTANDING!

First off, I liked your interesting characterisation of Hermione! I would never have imagined her to be the one to lose all sense and become drunk etc. etc. However you wrote this new side to her very well and even prevented the reader from having any doubts by creating a valid reason; her never being able to get over Ron and Lavender. Great Job!

I also love your description, especially of the castle and the room of requirement. You really painted a picture in my mind! Also, Hermione's drunken thoughts that were scattered throughout the one-shot were a great addition and help to tell the reader exactly what she is thinking; this is a great technique to use :)

A word of encouragement: Keep up your writing! You have done a brilliant job with this story and you have a unique style in the way you write! Can't wait to read more of your work!

-Your Secret Santa-

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