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Review:Jchrissy says:
So I think Dom's fit might even rival one I could throw, and that's saying something. Okay, I am again going to try and review this with the mindset that I don't know what happens. Haha.

Not only have you done something very humorous with this scene, the one in James's room, you've given us a ton of information in a sneaky way! We learned that James isn't tough as nails, has a bit of a sensitive side. We learned that Autumn and Dom don't have as great as a dynamic as I first though, but that it is probably a bit more one sided than I hoped with her thoughts regarding Quidditch. And I loved how obvious it was that she (Autumn) actually does like it.

Dom dom dom. She wants to seem all, I'm the best and I'm going to date him and everyone's going to want me and blah blah. But what she needs to do is not date ANYONE and make herself appear too good to date. Like she'd *ever* touch someone at Hogwarts, she's way better than them. Not that I'm thinking that for real, just trying to give our stuck up friend some advice :P

AHHH YAY! James totally likes her. He's smitten, even if he doesn't want to admit it. And they're going to fall in love and have babies and puppies and walk around with those little hearts floating around their heads ♥ please??

I still can't believe how I enjoy a chapter on the second read through just as much as I enjoy it on the first. You have a serious talent, m'dear.



Author's Response: HI.

-insert obligatory I'm so sorry it took me an age to get to responding to this review here -

Bah, sneak inserting information is just the best. I actually think one of the most fun thing about writing is giving everyone all the information is such a way that they don't even realise they're getting it (especially when writing mystery thing but)... yeah, I'm getting of the point a bit.

AHHA. That is a great piece of advice for Dom there. Although I'm trying to decide whether that would actually lead to people liking her more or not. Who knows?

I will write in hearts floating around their heads. Definitely. Yup. Gonna happen.

Thank you for another lovely review :D :D

Helen


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