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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hiya! Sorry I'm so late with getting back to you with this review - life is very busy at the moment! I've been feeling really guilty, sorry. D:

But anyway, this is looking good! I already like Tiffany; I have a soft-spot for troublemaker characters to be honest. But just make sure it doesn't become a little cliched? I like the plot twist where one of the Professors is her cousin, that's a really nice idea.

There are quite a lot of characters introduced in this chapter, which actually works rather well and helps the flow along. I got a little confused about the plot at times, but I can get the main idea: Albus and Tiffany are going on some sort of exchange. I've read lots of transfer fics but not an exchange one, so that was nice.

Just be careful about the 'voice' of your narrator if that makes sense; you want to make sur your main character is well-rounded and depthy, so perhaps tone down the things like *Sarcasm alert.. Sarcasm alert* I know you only do that once but now and then Tiff can sound a little... phony?

But apart from that, this was a really enjoyable read!
Again, sorry about lateness of review. :/ Good luck with the rest of the story!
-LWG

Author's Response: Hi! I'm sorry about the huge delay in response.. I usually respond when I first see a review, but I was an my phone and I can't reply with that etc.
Thank you :) She's like the opposite of me, although she's probably the reason why she's the opposite.. I think I channel alot of my aggression and evil through her, aha ;)

Yeah when I was first writing it, my friend was all like: 'Julia, be careful that doesn't seem like he's her boyfriend or something' as I hadn't immeadiatly put in he was her cousin...

Yeah, this is total new ground for me.. I've never moved schools or anything, and most of the girls from my primary school go to my secondary school, so I've never had to turn up half-way through the year at a place where I don't know anyone...

Mmm, I'll try to tone it down a bit :?

Thank you! Tis fine hun :) Thank you! And you with your stories! xx


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