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Review:Santa Claws says:
Now, first I have to say that I can spell Santa claus and instead am aiming for a slightly witty attempt at revealing that I am your Ravenclaw secret santa, but as I'm sure I just come across as someone who is spellingly-challenged I thought I'd make myself explicit. I know it sort of ruins the effect, but if you pretend this part of the review never happened then we can both move on.

Hullo! I was going to leave you a review for each day during advent, but after realising the site was going to be down it came to my attention that there'd be a lack of continuity which would upset me, so AFTER the site is back up and running smoothly... get excited for your daily dose of reviewage!

So, after that rather pointless introduction I'll now get to the important bit here - your story.

My favourite sorts of stories are the ones where I come away wanting to continue writing for a few more thousands words and what not because you have invoked the feels and, Mel, this definitely makes me want to write write write. All the lovely little snippets of their marriage were just beautiful and had me on the edge of my seat (well, I'm sat on the floor but you get the idea) going 'nononononononono, he can't be dead he can't he can't' but because of the lovely way you structured the thing I knew it was coming just as much as Molly did, and then and and and THEN Mel all the bits about thinking he should sit down was just ack ack ack ack, my Weasley feels are multiplying like the actual weasleys.

THIS Good news is preceded by better kisses. was one of the better and more lovely examples of how great you are and how much your description makes me all drooly (that's a compliment). And the proposal was just SO adorbs that I need to be put in the fridge to re-solidify after all the melting.

(I'm not sure when this review got so... weird so I am sorry for that. Sleep deprivation, you know)

Ack. You write such lovely shippy things and I really wish there was more of this to sink my teeth into.

So basically, I loved this and it was absolutely lovely. I'm sorry the first installment of your gift isn't as exciting as I wanted it to be, but I got all caught up with time and what not. BUT THERE ARE MORE COMING I PROMISE YOU.

Thank you for writing and happy December 14th!



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