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Review:Harrypotterbookworm says:
Daw. Just dawww. So short but so lovely.This was exactly what I wanted to read!

You know, I don't normally like ScoRose, but in this little one, I gave in. Just a little. Your style is such a ... cute style, you describe Rose's feeling really well. You made her relatable to people, which is sometimes a hard thing to do, so good job on that!

The plot is adorable, but I do think it could have been lengthened a bit. I mean, do Scorpius and Rose know each other? Does she like him? Had they been together in the past? I think a little more plot development would have been good and made this piece even better!

Your description is wonderful. I just can't get over it. You show the scene perfectly and show what's going on without it feeling dense. Again, a little more length, with more things for you to wonderfully describe would have been good, but what you have done is amazing.

- Nikki

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much for this wonderful review! I've thought about writing another oneshot based on this story, possibly even two, one to show their past, and one to show Scorpius and whats going on with him during the time he isn't with her while this is going on. I'm so thrilled that you think my description is good, and I'll look into possibly adding in more description and working on that! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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