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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Poor Hermione. All she wants to do is make Ron jealous, and punishing him turns out to be an even bigger punishment for herself. Even though Cormac didn't have many lines here, he still amused me and I've found myself sitting here wondering what happened to him. You've inspired me to write him in my next fan-fiction story!

The Hermione/Draco is a slow burn, which is good. That is always the thing that gets rushed in Dramiones, and is therefore the reason why most people don't find them believable. Authors with the patience to take it slowly but steadily are at a great advantage because they take the time to explain the hows and whys and whens. Draco's appearance here was brief but memorable.

I like that this seems to be brewing at a time in Hermione's life when she's feeling a little bit desperate, a little bit lonely. I'd imagine that Draco feels exactly the same way. Seeing as how Hermione has virtually no female friends to talk to about the Ron ordeal, and Harry wouldn't understand (or it would be too awkward to talk to him about it), it's only a matter of time before she does find someone who understands. The plausibility in this story that it started out with Hermione having feelings for Ron, and the hint that she will be conflicted about it when Draco begins to play a bigger role, makes it satisfying for readers on a believability level. Very enjoyable!

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Author's Response: Alright so getting a review from you is huge for me! I look at you as a really great author, because, well you are! So to have this extremely awesome review from you that is full of things that you think I have done right is great! I'm a huge dramione fan myself but I dont really care for the fact that most dramiones they get together on chapter one paragraph one. I think the slow burn makes the readers want it that much more and that much more excited when it finally comes! so for other people to think that as well makes me very happy! I just, I dont even know what else I can say about this review because it has just made me so happy! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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