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Review:Mystique says:
Wow, I really liked this story. You managed in a small amount of words to really create a story. I was drawn in and I wanted to know more. I wanted to know when Marlene would eventually leave Travers and how did their relationship start? Have you ever considered writing another story or one-shot about them.

I've never heard of this pairing before and reading this has made me want to read more about Marlene/Travers. They seem to be a twisted never ending relationship. Both desperately in love with each other and yet at the same time they hate each other. I especially liked the bit about Marlene asserting herself. That she isn't submissive to Travers.

This was really well written, I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors and I really enjoyed reading it.

Charlie

Author's Response: Hello Charlie. Glad to hear so. I have to be honest with you I have and am considering that but I haven’t got time for that and to be honest with you I’m facing a lack of inspiration for it, as I just wrote this all of the sudden and not with an idea in my head.

It seems to be like that, doesn’t it. Well in my head I always imagined it to be a bit headstrong so even in a moment like that Marlene would think and do that. Poor Travers haha!

Thank you for reviewing. Glad to hear so!


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