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Review:CassiePotter says:
THIS CHAPTER WAS SO AMAZING. I love how much detail we get, and Roxie's character is fabulous! You really do put her through a lot, though! I don't think I would be able it stand it if I were her! But she is incredibly strong, especially when you consider why she's so upset! It would be so hard trying to hold yourself together and appear normal after that, especially when you know that your family knows something's up.
George and Angie make me laugh and blush all at the same time! What with the pair of them and Audrey, I'd be mortified if I were one of their kids! I can't blame Perce for being horrified! Haha. And Molly dancing around in her panties! But I know Audrey has seen worse!
I'm happy that Roxie can trust Molly enough to tell her everything that happened and I hope that Molly will understand and comfort her! She needs it!
This chapter was awesome! And I can't wait for A Force of Wills! I'm working on LMT and will get it up as soon as possible, but I'm really busy for the next few weeks, so don't know if I'll get it up before the break... I'll try though! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Welcome back and thanks so much for reading! For a moment I didn't think that I'd gotten Roxie good enough, I had alot of trouble with her character for this chapter. I wondered if could find that balance between anger, shame and hurt but I think I did okay.
How she's managing at all is pretty surprising but I think that shows she has some back bone. Bwhahaha, George and Angie are hilarious! Did you see some of those jokes they were making?! And Audrey doesn't help and poor Perce, she's like his second mom so he has no real escape. Hahahah.
Hahaha, Molly dancing in her panties! How hilarious was that? Originally, she was singing a dirty song but I took it out for some reason. Roxanne loves Molly more than she does some of her other cousins I think and they're really close. She'll understand! :D
Argh, I'm hoping A Force of Wills is going to be up there today. I think the staff break is tomorrow so hopefully!
Thanks for coming back and good luck on LMT!
Much love,

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