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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
This is for the Holiday Review Extravaganza Event Two!

Hey!
This is sweet and once again you use the different sections really effectivly and to your advantage because they can go wrong s easily by breaking a story in an un-natural way but it fits with your story. The song lyrics were also nicely placed and they match what you were talking about which is always a good thing. :)

I thought it was sweet that he was trying to conact her but he didn't even know if he had been successful yet he didn't let that stop him. It was a nice touch and I also like how Harry and Hermione tried to comfort each other, it was just a nice moment in the middle of the war.

Hermione's last line "I couldn't help but be thankful that he was still standing beside me." really enforces the danger they were in and how easy it would have been for one of them to just die in battle!

Another great chapter and I'm adding to my favourites so that I know when you next update! Great job! :)

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