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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Poor Scorpius! This whole chapter was just full of feels for him! Between the beginning and finding out that his mother had died when he was pretty young, was now living in a rather cold place, his grandmother is also now dead, and there seems to be some sort of mystery going on with that. Then at the end with Lily proclaiming that they are no longer friends but I have no idea what happened between them to make that so only that they keep saying that something happened last summer! Gah i want to know what went on between them! Actually this whole chapter makes me want to know whats going on because not only am I trying to figure out the whole Scorpius/Lily thing but then Narcissa's death doesn't seem to be normal either, what with them cremating her which Lily states isn't normal for wizards. It really makes me wonder what exactly happened to her that made them cremate her.

The desciption in this was wonderful, fantastic really. I was in awe of your description throughout the whole chapter and you really did a wonderful job of portraying the whole scene! I really think I need to start reading more of your stuff because what you have done with this story so far in the first two chapters is just so amazing, and in some cases, is even better than books that I have bought! The description is just flawless and smooth and so easy to read. You can bet that I will be back to read more because I'm in love with this story right now and I must read more and find out what is going on! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08

Author's Response: Wow, this REVIEW is making me me full of feels! Thank you so, so much for saying such nice things about this chapter.

I definitely haven't made things easy for Scorpius here, but in my head, it just felt sort of right. I can't imagine everything that happened with the Malfoys to just wash away in a single generation. And yet I thought making life inside the Manor too easy for him, with a loving mother and all, might turn him into Draco 2.0, which I really didn't want him to be.

And I'm so glad all the different elements of the mystery are coming through. With this story, I'm always questioning how much to tell and how much to keep a secret.

Thank you again for such a nice review. If you do get a chance to read more, I hope you continue to enjoy :)


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