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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello there - Secret Santa back again with another gift ;)

So, I'm kinda confused, I have to admit. After reading the last chapter I was totally sure that the nurse treating Poppy was Andromeda. Now, though, you've told me her name is Elora... wow, nice one, me, lol. I got completely wrong, haha. Anyway, that doesn't mean I love her character any less. In fact, it only makes her more interesting because there are so many parallels between her and Andromeda and it's just so fascinating that they're there. And I like fascinating :)

This chapter was fabulous again, just like the last one. You went a lot further from the last chapter, even though you picked up at the same place in the 'now' time, if you know what I mean. It felt a lot more pacy, even though not much happened - I think all the information and the theories you talked about helped with that. By the way, the theories are incredible. I have no idea how you ever came up with something like that.

I did spot a couple of flow problems in this one, again, but they're really small things and didn't detract at all from the flow of the chapter. Firstly, you put: including yourself as you dynamically interact with the fleeting colors and semi-familiar people. As you start falling towards the ground. So it's your body that is falling... It just doesn't seem to really make sense. The middle sentence 'as you start...the ground' seems completely random. Maybe link it to the one after? Also, you put 'he hadn't a battery'. 'Hadn't' is the shortened form of 'had not' which doesn't work. Instead, it should be 'he didn't have'. Again, just a couple of tiny things ;)

STILL, this is so intriguing. I'm hooked. Figuratively speaking, of course ;) But, seriously, I have so many questions! Why is Poppy so serious about curing things? How does she end up at Hogwarts? How did her disease get cured when it was supposed to be terminal? What happened to Aldean? Will she succeed in curing it? What else did she learn in Healing School? Will Madam Elora help her? I NEED ANSWERS, PLEASE. But in your own time - seriously. I'm enjoying this so much I wouldn't mind if there were another ten chapters or only two :)

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it and cannot think of anything constructive to say. Just loved it.

Love,
Secret Santa

Clue: I have read Progeros. All of it :) (Loved that too...)

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