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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Holiday Review Swap!

This is really astounding, actually. Fred and George revolve heavily around my story, and so does grief, and I'm beginning to think about how I'm going to write Fred dying. He's so integral, the nucleus of any group he's in. I don't think George would ever be the same.

Your descriptions are perfect. When someone you love so desperately leaves you behind on Earth you do go a bit delirious, a bit crazy, kind of reduced to nothingness, and I think you described all of that brilliantly, I could feel every lick of pain that George did. I also like how you showed how nobody else really understood his pain, nobody elses grief could compare. It's so realistic.

I really like the moment with Ginny at the end, it makes tons of sense that she would be the one to try and bring George back to himself instead of any other member of the family. The relationship between Ginny and the twins is kind of unexplored so I'm hoping that's continued in this :)

Wonderful job! I really want to continue this :)

Author's Response: Hello there! Thanks for your fantastic review :D

I love Fred and George too...they're my favourite characters along with Lee Jordan. But I do find them quite difficult to write! I'm so glad you liked this chapter - I've tried to convey George's sense of shock and grief here and I'm quite relieved that you find it realistic! And yes, I'd like to explore Ginny's relationship with the twins a little more; I think she's the sibling who might've been closest to them. And probably the most similar to them!

Well, thanks so much again for reading! I'm very happy you chose to do the swap with me! Happy Holidays :D

-teh

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