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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hey there! Reviewing this from the Christmas Swap!

I have to admit that I've never actually read a Percy story, in my mind he's always been a bit lacking in ... substance? flavour? You get my drift. And Audrey was this version of Narcissa Malfoy, where she wasn't necessarily evil, but very ambitious and just pushed him around.

That was then. This is now. I loved this first chapter and how bubbly and fun Audrey is. Unexpected from my point of view, that Percy should meet his future wife in a pub. But it's your party so to say. :D

I loved this take of Percy, where he is just as lost as he ever was and is just trying to find his way.

The story flows nicely, the dialogue is funny and light and the grammar is very good. There are a few spelling mistakes, but nothing that affects the story.

Good job!

Ral

Author's Response: Hi there!

Im really glad that you enjoyed the chapter! I did try really hard to change people's views about both Percy and Audrey. I just feel that Percy is a very misunderstood character, and therefore so is Audrey.

Im happy that you really like this new Percy! And sometimes, unexpected is good :)

Thank you for a sweet review!
- Abhi

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