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Review:adluvshp says:
Holiday Review Extravaganza Event Two

This was such a despairing story. I felt sad reading this. The emotions and thoughts of your main character were expressed quite well through the narrative. The way he described the "ceremony" was a bit different from the way I had imagined it to be but nonetheless, it was chilling. The ending was powerful, the last line hit me with impact. I was quite absorbed while reading this, so good work.

There were some grammar/spelling errors in your writing though. For instance, you misspelled Malfoy Manor as "Manner" and carted as "charted", and Lucius as "Luscious". I suggest going over this carefully again, or getting this edited by a beta to improve the grammar. Apart from that, it made a good read.

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Wow, you used this for Holiday Review Extravaganza? That's awesome! Yeah, I thought I fixed those but obviously not. *hides in the corner* Haha! Anyways, thank you so much for the review anyways, and Happy Holidays! :)

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