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Review:ScarletEye158 says:
Hey!

This was a very cute first chapter! :) I loved the relationship between Tracey and Audrey and how Tracey was worried about whether she was a good mother or not. It made it pretty realistic and I felt bad for her being a single mother and having to do it all alone!

I liked the way you characterized Tracey, too. She seems like a pretty straightforward but nice and easygoing person and I like that :) The way she interacted with different characters depending on who they were was very realistic because I can act very differently around my friends, people I don't like, and guys, so I can see why she was nice to Lexi but sarcastic and annoyed with Loretta!

At first glance at this story I thought it was going to be a story dealing with Tracey getting pregnant by Theodore, but I guess I was wrong! I'm excited to know where this goes, though, and to see how Theo and Audrey get along :)

Great first chapter and I'll definitely be back for more!:D

-Amanda

Author's Response: Even though I haven't updated this story in a while (I do plan on updating it soon though), I still very much love this story! For some reason Tracey and Theo just belong together in my mind. I'm always blown away when people tell me that I've done a good job portraying the single mother life as I don't have any kids of my own let alone being a single mother so its a huge compliment for me to get for this story!Yeah this story is a bit different, she's already had her kid, and Theo is in no way the actual father, but instead its a telling of finding love after having a child. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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