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Review:Akussa says:
Hi!

I really enjoyed this chapter. The tension and emotion was tangible; you could feel it though the words and the descriptions.

Narcissa's vision and understanding was spot on. Her life has taken a turn for the worst when the two people she loves most dearly have engaged into something that is much bigger than them and where they will be considered objects, replacable and disposable.

Bellatrix was also very well presented. You managed to give her just the right amount of craziness without falling into the cliche.

I'm not a big Katy Perry fan so I didn't know this song but simply reading the lyrics you chose, it fitted perfectly with your story, the mood as well and the rythm of your writing. The parts where there was lyrics didn't break the flow of your chapter so, great job!

Definitly a nice chapter, perfectly dark and dramatic, just like I like them :)

Author's Response: Hey there, I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you for the review and I'm glad you think the lyrics fit! :)


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