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Review:queenwombat says: be honest... i think you're an amazing writer but this was a little disappointing. I think that James is being ridiculously stupid and so is Violet they obviously like each other and don't notice it (i like all that) but i think that James needs to be 'fuller' in this story he is portrayed like a loose. This is just how i feel, but i wanted James to be like a nice honest guy who would only go that far with a girl because of deeply buried emotions, that have been held back for so long, all coming out. Not the way he was with Chasity. I know the one thing i was waiting for in this was James' response or like James' parents response you know. the fact that the only other person who knows about Violet's 'condition' is madam pomfrey and a fourteen year old girl who can't see the issues with Violet's situation isn't full enough. This plot isn't running too slow but she needs to tell him and quick. I think also the reason why this was disappointing was because you left on such a high note last chapter and nothing came of it. this review was very harsh, i actually did like this chapter but i wasn't what i anticipated, you are a GREAT writer but please make sure she tells SOMEONE!! please for the sake for my sanity update soon! i'm sorry i gave so much criticism but this story has taken over my life. i still think that you are fabulous! please please please update soon. i need this story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for phrasing this review in such a way that it was harsh but constructive, rather than being mean for no reason, it really helped me a lot.

I'm really glad for your honesty, I really appreciate it. Everything you mentioned is true, and I know it. I PROMISE you things will begin to pick up next chapter!

Thanks for your help, and for taking the time to review!

~yerawizard27 x

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